on 2013-02-05 10:03 pm (UTC)
uneulogized: (gotta love them shoulder wounds.)
Posted by [personal profile] uneulogized
[if only the plundering were clearer sooner ...

ANYWAY, his hand strokes up slow with the digging, fingers wrapping just a little tighter. his thumb teases over the head of Dirk's cock once he gets there, spreading the precum before his fingers feather down along the shaft, wrapping around at the base]

on 2013-02-05 10:12 pm (UTC)
uneulogized: (spots on your dick is serious.)
Posted by [personal profile] uneulogized
Somehow I think that parallel just fell extremely flat.

on 2013-02-05 10:16 pm (UTC)
uneulogized: (heh. i swallowed twenty quarters.)
Posted by [personal profile] uneulogized
It's not that part that I didn't like, so much as the entire statement at all. It didn't work.

[shrugs and then strokes upward, kissing him so that the commentary ends]

on 2013-02-08 05:57 am (UTC)
uneulogized: ([kissing] a little more.)
Posted by [personal profile] uneulogized
[considers breaking the kiss to let him have his question, but nah, let's keep kissing and stroking]